Soulless was good and I'm looking forward to Changeless, but...well, I'll just say it didn't quite live up to my hopes. The worldbuilding definitely goes into the plus column, working supernatural beings into society in a fantastic way... I've never seen an urban fantasy do before, and I'm eager to see a number of the characters again, especially Conall Maccon and Prof. Lyall....
more Soulless was good and I'm looking forward to Changeless, but...well, I'll just say it didn't quite live up to my hopes. The worldbuilding definitely goes into the plus column, working supernatural beings into society in a fantastic way... I've never seen an urban fantasy do before, and I'm eager to see a number of the characters again, especially Conall Maccon and Prof. Lyall. There's also a good deal of bickering between Alexia and Maccon that's fun to read.
I did find the romance-novel content a bit of a surprise--I wouldn't call it adult content per se, because it never gets *quite* explicit, but there's still a lot than I had any indication there would be, to the point that I'd almost be inclined to shelve it under paranormal romance. Bigger issues, though: Alexia is a strong enough character to carry this series, but she's somehow both presented as such and also not allowed to be. We're *told* far more than *shown* what she's like and how strongminded etc. she is. Much of the dialogue is the same way, in that we're told that a character was confused when it's already obvious from what she said, or a speech tag is used in a self-conscious way that jars you just a bit, reminding you that there's An Author writing here. Other elements feel a little affected in the same way, trying for biting wit or Victorian sensibilities and not *quite* getting there. Being jerked out of the story by odd things like that was always a disappointment, because I really *wanted* to like it--I just couldn't quite get lost in the story, because the writing style wouldn't let me.
That's too bad, because I love the concept and think Gail Carriger seems like an awesome person, just from looking around her blog & website. Good thing is, I think these are probably marks of a first novel, all things that can be improved with a little more security in one's ability to write. The characters and story here are plenty good enough to stand on their own. They just need to be trusted to do so.
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