As for the second installment, I read about half of it and returned it to the library. Sorry, but this time I wasn't even gripped by the story (which was also a copy, paste, edit fantasy) and I still couldn't look past the grammatical no nos. You just don't use the same adjectives to describe different things in the same paragraph, and that is just one of his minor infractions. For this reason,...
more As for the second installment, I read about half of it and returned it to the library. Sorry, but this time I wasn't even gripped by the story (which was also a copy, paste, edit fantasy) and I still couldn't look past the grammatical no nos. You just don't use the same adjectives to describe different things in the same paragraph, and that is just one of his minor infractions. For this reason, amongst others, is why it SHOULD take as long as it does to establish yourself as an author. This one gets an F grade, and if you know me at all, I only hand out Fs to the books I don't finish without intent to ever read again. The third book, I won't even read the dust jacket to. Not worth my time.
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