Where was the editor for this book? This story is overlong and a good third of it could be removed without losing the story. It starts out well but by the last third of the book I found myself wishing for it just to end already. And the concert fundraiser as a device to tidy up all of the characters' lives was unnecessary. When a book goes on too long unecessarily, I begin to resent the...
more Where was the editor for this book? This story is overlong and a good third of it could be removed without losing the story. It starts out well but by the last third of the book I found myself wishing for it just to end already. And the concert fundraiser as a device to tidy up all of the characters' lives was unnecessary. When a book goes on too long unecessarily, I begin to resent the author, the editor, the publisher, etc...
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