I was a little embarrassed when I started reading these, because they're bad. They're very badly written, they characters are not just generic, but really unlikeable, and there are huge chunks that any literate editor would have ripped out. But the plot was compelling. Not so much in the second book, but enough to keep me going. Slogging through Bella, our star, the typical teenage pretty...
more I was a little embarrassed when I started reading these, because they're bad. They're very badly written, they characters are not just generic, but really unlikeable, and there are huge chunks that any literate editor would have ripped out. But the plot was compelling. Not so much in the second book, but enough to keep me going. Slogging through Bella, our star, the typical teenage pretty person who thinks she has problems. Her biggest problem is that she doesn't enjoy things that are fun. She also throws herself constant pity parties, even twisting memories to be more morose. But, as all girls with real problems know, guys are suckers for hot girls who should be in the asylum, and Bella's scored not only a hot (though not terribly progressive) vampire and a sexy werewolf who is not only funny but knows how to fix German cars. And by now, the plot is running thin, Bella's choices seem obvious, and I'd really like to kick Bella in the shins, give Edward the vampire a good talking to about how women are not possessions, and maybe lock Jacob the werewolf up in a hotel room with a good deprogrammer until he realizes that Bella was not an angel on Earth, merely the first girl who didn't laugh at his Rabbit.
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